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Amateur club

Name: Saeed bin Mubarak Al-Mukhaini / Sultanate of Oman. Membership number: 231
Age: 22 years
Occupation: artillery officer
Equipment: Camera (3 - Nikonf)

- the friend is happy
Your pictures are good, the emphasis remains, especially with regard to the scene of the hill of rocks, in which the top of the summit was supposed to stick to the left at the top of the picture, here we get a composition and emphasis that attracts the view. And you should quit such actions.
The image of beauty on the beach is wonderful.
The picture on TV and the magazine are good.
As for the picture of the boat in the moonlight, the center line has weakened the shot, despite its beauty. You should stay away from focusing your subject in the center of the picture.
In general, your photos are very good, with my congratulations to you ⏹

Name: Fawaz Zahed / Jableh - Syria
Membership number: 232.
Age 30 years
Occupation: Painter - camera equipment (Kodak)

- Friend Fawaz
It is clear that you are a first-class painter. As for photography, you still have a long way to go, in terms of equipment or in terms of vision and recordable subjects.
Finally, we thank you for your gift - the image of the singer Sabah - and our greetings to you ⏹

Name: Amer Najib Zaytoun / Beirut - Lebanon
Membership number: 233
Age: 18 years
Occupation: High school student
Equipment: Camera (CHINON CP5)

Aamir friend
The shots of flowers are good in terms of technique, and they only lack a touch of pre-arrangement, so that your work is more complete and more accurate. I mean, you should move away as much as possible from focusing in the center of the frame, because that gives rigidity to the image.
Your other photos need to be studied in terms of frame and shooting angles⏹

Name - Samih Musa Muhammad Asmran / Amman - Jordan
Membership number: 234
Age: 26 years
Occupation: employee of the airline company - high-equipment camera (Canon)

Samih, the friend
You have to read, my friend, what I submitted does not express anything about the photographic foundations that we present in the magazine, especially through the lessons. The scene of the mosque could have been much better if it had been raised a little or if it had moved closer to pay attention to the details. As for the second snapshot, its exposure was wrong, as you have to choose the subject And the aim of it, and the exposure must be balanced ⏹

The name is Osama bin Saad Al-Din Al-Zoubi. / Aleppo, Syria
Membership number: 235
Age: 21 years
Occupation: nouveau salesman
Equipment - Camera (Konica) and others (1 - Canon-AT)

Osama's friend
The positive and negative pictures are good, and this means that you are well versed in the basics of laboratory work. We found that your other photos are of a lower standard than your published works, and you do not know the reason for that.. They are far from any artistic or technical vision⏹

Name - Fuad Muhammad Al-Qassab / Jubail, Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.
Membership number: 236
Age 220 years
Occupation: Student at King Faisal University
Equipment: NIKON-F.G camera and Durst M370 printer.

Fouad's friend
The night scene is good in terms of exposure, and this is also the case with regard to the rest of the images. The important note remains, which is to look for effects that attract attention, instead of keeping your works rigid and motionless.
In the scene of the palm trees, it was assumed that the sun would be shaded more because its rays were distributed and humanely rather than coming strong, and this required waiting for the sun to go down a little in the scene. Sunset «You notice that the image was routine, not even very ordinary, and as we have repeatedly said, we have to cancel the center line, by adopting a third in the foreground, and leaving two-thirds for the back of the scene, or vice versa.
As for the river scene, it was also normal to lose balance and choose the appropriate angle.
In the last scene, we notice that the electricity pole and tape have distorted the view, and we have been constantly alerted to the need to remove all visual obstructions in general.

Name: Ahmed Baqer Ahmed / Al-Dair - Bahrain
Membership number: 247
Age: 25 years.
Profession: employee
Equipment Camera (OLLUMPUS-OM2)

- Friend Ahmed
The picture of the natural landscape with the lake is a good example of a successful business, where composition is strong and balance is present.
As for the other natural scene, you notice with us that it came very weak, and emptiness and immobility fill it, so stay away from these shots.
In general, your photos are good⏹